And relax …

So I finally put the final touches to the first person edit of Véradó – The Workers (see page on the right.)

Months ago the suggestion was made that the story might be better told from the first person point of view as it would add a certain depth that it perhaps lacked at the time.

I won’t deny that it’s been a pretty hard slog and I’ve not managed a single pov as the story has to be told from several different angles so it’s now in multi pov.

I’m really pleased with the way it’s turned out though, it reads so much better now and the characters seem to have been brought to life so I feel they were a few month’s well spent.

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One thought on “And relax …

  1. princesslizzykins says:

    Well done, Jen, glad you’re hard work has paid off. What’s next? Publish?? xx

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